Batpony Scootaloo (MLP short story)Rainbow Dash just landed in the middle of the town at night when Scootaloo arrives close by.
Scootalo: Hey Rainbow Dash...
Rainbow Dash: Scoots? What are you doing outside at this hour?
S: Oh! don't worry.
RD: You can get lost pretty easily in the dark...
S: The dark? I can see clearly in the dark...
RD: Huh? There is something's different about you...
S: Oh! You noticed?
RD: Well... You just said me you can see in the dark... and those eyes... they glow in the dark.
S: Cool, uh?
RD: Uh, yeah. Wait! Are those....
S: Yeah! Bat wings!
RD: I'm talking about the fangs.... What? You got bat wings?
S: And I can fly!!! I can fly with those wings! Like every pegasi... like you!
RD: Scoots.... you are no longer a pegasus now...
S: I.... I know... but I can fly! That is so awesome! I will able to fly with you! By your side!
S: You could teach me all your most awesome air tricks...
RD: Scoots.... Wait a second!
RD: *sigh* You are no longer a pegasus now. You are a batpony.
My Little Pony OC making
Who do I think I am writing about what's a Mary Sue and what isn't?
The answer really, I can't say. Some people will ignore this, some people will bash me, some people will take this at face value, and some people will take this as suggestions (Which is kind of the point)
First and foremost, making a character should not be, under any circumstances an obligation, it should be FUN for YOU. So if you're happy with your characters, that's everything that matters, but don't expect everyone else to fall in love with him/her too.
Again, these are just suggestions, you can follow it (or not) in any order you like, until you find something you’re comfortable with.
What's a Mary Sue?
There are several ways to make a Mary Sue, but the most obvious answer is that a Mary Sue always goes to the extremes: Too perfect, too angsty, too dark, etc.
Basically, it's a wish-fulfillment character she (usually, a she, but sometimes a he) is better than anyone in the cast in EVERY way possible, i
Pokemon Creepypasta Red's LoveI was different than most of the pokemon fans I have seen. I got into pokemon around the time of Heartgold and Soulsilver. Soulsilver was a surprise Christmas present that I got one year. I started playing it and I couldn't stop! That is, until Pokemon Black and White came out. I was ecstatic when I heard all about the new game. When I got pokemon black, I instantly dropped Soulsilver and got started on the new game. I all of it! Everything was way better than Soulsilver, and I even got a crush on the character, N. I used to have a crush on Red, but everything I had done on Soulsilver seemed to vanish, except my love of the pokemon I had in the game. I eventually wanted to bring my beloved pokemon from Soulsilver into Pokemon Black, so I tried my hardest as possible to beat the Elite Four.
One day, after three tries to beat the Elite Four and loosing, I decided to go back to my Soulsilver for some nostalgia. After starting up the game and skipping past the intro, I looked at the start